This passage concludes chapter 9 of David Copperfield, Charles Dickens’
eighth novel published in serialised form between 1849 and 1850. David, an
orphan and the narrator of the novel, spent his early childhood with his mother
Clara and their devoted servant Peggotty. Then David’s mother got married again to
a tyrannical man named Edward Murdstone who settled in the Copperfields’ house
with his sister Jane. In order to get rid of the boy, Murdstone sent him to a
boarding school. This is where, on the day he turns nine, he learns that his
mother has died. He is at once sent home, where Peggotty relates to him his
mother’s death.
This passage revolves
around mother figures. I will first deal with the importance of Peggotty in
this passage. I will then turn my attention to the object of her narrative: the
death of Clara.
At this precise point of the novel, Peggotty takes a
huge importance in David’s life. Now that his mother is dead, she becomes the
only character who loves him and his only link to childhood. Her role is
central in this extract.
For this scene, the narrator creates an ambivalent
atmosphere which matches the ambiguity of the day, marked by David’s birthday and
his mother’s death. On the one hand, the atmosphere is almost that of a
ceremony, extremely quiet and silent: as the narrator writes, he remembers, the
day “was so like Sunday”, the day of the week on which Christians keep Sabbath,
because of its “stillness”. This unusual quiet is a constant reminder of the
recent death of Clara. On the other hand, David and Peggotty are sharing a
moment of confidence and warmth in the boy’s bedroom, Peggotty holding his
hand, kissing and stroking it throughout the scene (l. 6-8). Thus Peggotty’s
character almost brightens this lugubrious scene thanks to her mother-like,
comforting tenderness. Conversely, the ghastly surroundings of the house filled
by a funeral atmosphere and dominated by the uncaring Murdstones brings out the
relief brought by Peggotty.
This passage takes the form of a narration inside the
narration. David the narrator gives Peggotty the narration of Clara’s death,
and makes David the character the recipient of her narration. The decision to
give Peggotty this “spot” is crucial in terms of tone. Peggotty is a servant.
Her command of language is not that of a scholar. She is not always comfortable
with words (for example, she can never get “crocodile” right). Therefore her
narrative style is marked by simplicity and spontaneity rather than
sophistication. Her sentences are fairly basic in structure. In addition, her
use of adjective and adverbs is very scarce and limited to the expression of
deep, sincere emotions: “such a patient smile, the dear ! – so beautiful!”
(l. 92-3), “the poor lamb” (referring to Clara’s baby, l. 80). The only
occurrence of a chain of three adjectives in a row: “her stupid cross old
Peggotty” is devoted to mock-self-deprecation. The reader senses that
Peggotty’s emotion is as strong as her way of expressing it is plain.
Dickens here seems to have learnt from his failure of The Old Curiosity Shop, where the death
of Little Nell was notoriously stretched to pages upon pages of unbearably
sentimental, pompous prose, which made this episode an irritating or even
involuntarily comic one to many readers. Most crucially, this passage gives the act of narration a vital importance. Indeed Peggotty, through her narrative, helps David overcome, or at least cope with, the trauma of his mother’s death.
Mother-like qualities are conflated in Peggotty in
this extract. Now that Clara is dead and that Peggotty relates her death to
David, she more or less becomes her substitute. Clara’s figure is brought up by
Peggotty’s narration. Besides, Peggotty becomes Clara’s mouthpiece when she brings
her last words to David: “tell him that his mother, when she lay here, blessed
him not once, but a thousand times” (l. 83).
The fact that Clara is, as it were, fused with
Peggotty, may explain why this scene is far from being as gruesome as it might
have been. Clara is still present, in a way, and her qualities are merged with
the more mother-like protectiveness of Peggotty.
Peggotty provides David with the last image he will
ever have of his mother. Her narration is therefore crucial in the building of her
“legend”. The features of her character that the reader already knows are
presented again and linked to her death. The reader is reminded of her lack of
strength and self-confidence: “she was uncertain in her mind” (l. 15-6) during
her pregnancy. There is a brief improvement in her condition after the baby’s
birth (l. 17-8), but the way she sings to her baby “like a voice up in the air,
that was rising away” (l. 25-6) is already ominous. On the whole Clara’s
uncertainty increases with the approach of death: “she got to be more timid and
more frightened-like” (l. 27-9).
This is once more the occasion to oppose Clara’s two
husbands. Clara reminds Peggotty of the way Mr Copperfield, David’s father, did
his best to conquer her self-doubts (l. 95-102). On the other hand, Mr
Murdstone and his intrusive sister keep forcing on her the self-image of a
silly, immature girl unable to look after herself: “thoughtless” and
“light-hearted” (l. 46-7). “He will believe it more and more” (l. 57-8) implies
that her second husband does not take her declining health seriously. Apart
from the flippant, rude mention of “them two downstairs” (l. 67), the
Murdstones are surprisingly absent from Peggotty’s narration. We must not
forget that she is hardly a detached, impartial narrator, so her resentment may
lead her to downplay their part as much as possible. However, Dickens so
constantly stresses her honesty that he cannot expect us to suspect her of not
being truthful. The Murstones’ near-total absence in is probably the consequence
of their lack of emotional involvement with Clara. Moreover, their presence
would pollute this narrative and possibly change its tone to one of anger and
resentment, while Dickens’s aim was cleary to preserve the warm intimacy of
this key passage.
Nevertheless, both David and the reader can’t but know
that Clara has died to the hands of the Murdstones, a victim of their
manipulation. Their apparent indifference enhances the pathos of her death.
This pathos relies on forebodings (l. 41-3, 54, 57-60, 76-9), a message to
David (l. 81-5) and the dignified, gradual way in which life slips out of her (many elements throughout the passage).
Peggotty’s narration seems calculated to cause an
idealisation of her person by David. He notes that his mother’s death obliterates
his recent experience of alienation from her after her second marriage (l.
119-20, l. 133-4). Without insisting on the obvious angelic nature of his image
of his mother (once again, the lesson of The
Old Curiosity Shop), he hints to it with two discreet metaphors: “a voice
up in the air, that was rising away” (l. 25-6) and “she winged her way…” (l.
132).
To conclude, I wish to focus on David’s step-brother,
here alluded to three times. Peggotty’s narration seems to attribute Clara’s
death to her pregnancy, although her baby’s birth does her good (§ 2). Later,
Peggotty relates her wish to be buried with him if he were to die (l. 76-81). In David’s own conclusion to the
chapter, he identifies to this dead baby (last paragraph). Maybe this is
attributable to the narrator rather than the character. Anyway, this image sums
up the feeling that David’s childhood is over, buried with his mother and an
image of himself, his entire previous life erased. A first David is dead,
another one is to be born.